Hello.

This is my third Blender Animation and I would like some feedback for
when I make the second episode.

Thanks The Video is posted below.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQxC9isc1rA&feature=plcp

Just wondering is this a dead forum?
Where would be a good place to post my video if I want feedback...

You are posting your videos on the developer's forum. If you want feedback, a better place would be the user forums at blenderartists.org .

Thanks